Помогите проверить сочинение, пожалуйста.it is common knowledge,that a lot of people prefer living in a big…

Помогите проверить сочинение, пожалуйста.it is common knowledge,that a lot of people prefer living in a big city,but everybody knows,that such lifestyle is harmful for your health,so other people move to the villages. Which way of lifestyle is better? I personally think, that urban life is more better,than life in a countryside. I think so,because,firstly,there are a lot of possibilities to find a well-paid job. Secondly,Life in city is more interesting,because you can go to the theater,cinema,restaurant or gallery. Thirdly, this way of life is easier. It is very convenient life in a flat. You do not care about hot water,light and gaz.But there are people who think differently. They think that those people who live in the country have a good health. Moreover the air here is fresh and clean and there are not noisy crowds or traffic jams . In fact that some people feel lonely and depressed in a big city.However I cannot support their point of view,because live in village is boring and difficult. In addition it is not simple keeps an economy.In conclusion I would like say that both way of life have advantages and disadvantages. It is more important to get an good education and be a success person.