Правельно ли я перевел: In 1961 he came back to Hong Kong. At the age of 7 he entered the school of the Beijing Opera.Practicing…

Правельно ли я перевел: In 1961 he came back to Hong Kong. At the age of 7 he entered the school of the Beijing Opera.Practicing from 5 am until late at night every day, under the strict supervision of teachers who can carve for any disobedience or deprive of food, the students honed their masterstvoVpervye Jackie appeared on screen at the age of 8 years in an episode of "Big and Little Wong Tin Bar", and for all the time in school, he appeared in episodes of about 20 times.